Conrad Rice

Hi blackbird. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be giving you a quick review today. So, I'm actually not seeing much in the way of problems here. You have a good ...

Well, you could always do an And Then There Were None style story, but put it in space. Barring that, maybe telling the story out of order. Mix up the ...

Hi there napalmerski. I'm Conrad Rice, and I thought I would stop by to give you a review over this. And now it looks like the Sirdash have forgotten the ...

Hi Rosey. I have to agree with June that I think this needs some adding onto. It feels, and looks, threadbare when compared to your other sketches. You have a ...

Hi Rosey. So, another one of your sketches. You should really think about doing more of these. I know they're not much in the way of plot or character development, ...

Hi Rosey. I have to say that I do like this piece. It is pleasing to read, painting a very good mental picture. You use your descriptive words effectively. I ...

Hi Rosey. Not a lot to say with this one. You use quite a bit of descriptive language, and you use it well. The mental picture you paint in our ...

I support the "Mods-open" option, simply because not all of us can get on at the weekend together, due to conflicting lives and schedules and things. If a Mod periodically ...

Hi Rosey! This will be short, cause your story is rather short and I am not seeing a lot wrong with it. So. here we go. The only thing that ...

I know she's been tattled on like, a million times, but I just want to report Snoink for being awesome and helping me out with my math when things were ...

Hello squarened! I'm Conrad Rice, and I will be your reviewer for today. I have to say that I really like this story. A lot. Like, am in love with ...

Hi captain.classy! I'm Conrad Rice, and I will be your reviewer for today. So, I can see that this is the beginning of a much larger work. Therefore, I will ...

Hi KnightlyAngel09. I'm Conrad Rice, and I shall be your reviewer for today. So, this story is confusing. We have the entire first part devoted to the main character's morning ...

Hi Kamas! I just thought I would stop in and give you a review. So, while I usually don't like poems with a message, I think I can make an ...

Hi SleepyJackie! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'm going to give you a quick little review today. Usually, purple prose, even in poetry, is something that I caution people to stay ...